Like any aspiring comic, Gulliver Keyes was eager to try out material anywhere people would listen—even to an audience behind a two-way mirror while spread-eagled and strapped to a physical restraint.
First of all, where did you get the incredible illustrations? If you drew them, you are incrediblly talented.
The story is very exciting, but it leaves me with questions about Gulliver's relationship with his father. Do we find out more about that and why he allows his son to be semi-tortured. I'd also like more insight into Gulliver and what he hopes to accomplish by allowing this to happen to him. Maybe it was in there and I missed it.
The opener is a parody is of gay converson therapy - it was shameful to Dad that Gulliver wanted to be a comic, not work in a "reputable" business like advertising. See the consequences in Episode 2.
First of all, where did you get the incredible illustrations? If you drew them, you are incrediblly talented.
The story is very exciting, but it leaves me with questions about Gulliver's relationship with his father. Do we find out more about that and why he allows his son to be semi-tortured. I'd also like more insight into Gulliver and what he hopes to accomplish by allowing this to happen to him. Maybe it was in there and I missed it.
The opener is a parody is of gay converson therapy - it was shameful to Dad that Gulliver wanted to be a comic, not work in a "reputable" business like advertising. See the consequences in Episode 2.
Looks promising!